[Dargon-writers-list] Grim Review: Dafydd's Challenge Story, draft 3

[Jon Evans]

White, John wrote:
> Maybe RTP, maybe not ...
>   

I still like it.  It's short and sweet, and does what it was intended to 
do: introduce the readers to a segment of Dargon landscape, characters, 
and personality.

-Grim

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